Rearranging a comic page and colouring it

I felt that the flow of the journal comic I did during the workshop could be better. So I rearranged the panels and put related items next to each other. Sometimes that can make a big difference! I rearranged it digitally but one could also cut and paste a physical comic. I also coloured the comic digitally. But I drew the original on a whiteboard during the workshop (It has since been erased). Compare it with the original below. Does it work better?